Tuesday, October 5, 2010

The Second Exercise- A Poem Based on An Exercise by the late Peter Wild



Peter Wild was an American Poet who taught at UC San Diego for many years. I had the good fortune of publishing two of Peter's early poetry chapbooks. This poem is based on an exercise he used in his writing class. The first and the last lines are constrained. I further constrained the line length and number of lines. Here is what happened.


For centuries lovers have looked at the stars

The stars that look over the world when asleep

The world made up of dreamers, risk takers, mothers fathers and children with running feet

These mischievous kids who cause trouble wherever they go

Full of energy and weapons like firecrackers that blow up

What if we blow up the dog? They say

And BOOM! One leg is blown away

And the mother cries

And the father hurls

But they love their children

Children who are part of the world

Made up of dreamer, risk takers, mothers, fathers, and children with running feet

The ones that look at the stars

What do we look for when we stare at the stars, at the night, dark but full of star light

We want love and protection from those that surround us

Beep beep who’s that man in the beer truck outside our house?

Someone call the dreamers, the risk takers, the mother, the father, to save the children with running feet

Run and hide

Someone help these mischievous kids

And the three-legged dog chased the beer truck out of town


...Angelica Flores


For centuries lovers have looked to the stars

Their indefinite love binding their hearts

This cocoon embraces their bodies

Reality is merely utopianism

They sit in a restaurant booth

The window next to the woman, tainted by soiled handprints and aging dust

slowly peels off with the falling water droplets.

The other side is dark, inhumane, odd

and the three-legged dog chased the beer truck out of town



...Christina Zuniga


Destiny

For centuries lovers have looked to the stars

Hoping to decipher the ways of the fates.

One such couplet of lovers, staring,

Found much bewilderment when pondering the cosmos.

What they saw was not a story

Of love, nor of hate nor of jealousy,

But peculiarly it was a story of a woeful dog!

This dog, just a simple creature of the earth,

Was a cripple for it had only three legs.

For hours and hours, the lovers watched.

They gleamed with much mirth and wonder,

The life of this animal, as unfortunate and curious as it was.

They saw not only its current bestial life,

But the one beyond. The one it was destined to live.

The life it would eventually lead

Would only be possible if it ceased its chase.

For the lovers had seen that it would meet a tragic end

If it persisted in its ways.

With great sadness in their eyes, they saw that end

And the three-legged dog chased the beer truck out of town…


...Laura O’Hagan


Garry and the Bar


For centuries lovers have looked to the stars,

Usually this happens when they come back from the bars.

At the bars is where they shed their tears and moan,

And ask their love issue questions in a serious tone.


Then one day, to the bar, came an odd man,

With him he brought a dented pan.

He drove a beer truck and announced his named to be Garry,

He was too ghastly to be called a bad apple, more like a black cherry.


He began to order drinks, one after another,

When asked he said the bill would be paid by his brother.

With time the owner got worried and started to fear,

He hoped Garry was dreaming of free beer.


The owner finally demanded some money,

That’s when Garry thought he’d be a little funny.

Garry grabbed his dented pan and aimed at the owner,

He thought the owner was frightened because he ran to the corner.


But the owner whistled and out came a three-legged dog,

Even with only three legs he was bigger than a hog.

Scared Garry jumped into his truck with a frown,

And the three-legged dog chased the beer truck out of town.


...Naila Khan



For centuries lovers have looked to the stars

Two lovers of equal thought, two lovers at the park

They sit in single silence, no dead bodies in between

No violence, no hate, just love

They stare at each other thinking,

Their gazes blank with understanding

Their bodies close and the grass prickly

Between their warm intertwined hands

The wind emanating from the trees, the only sound

It shakes the passive leaves around

Then the crickets sing along in harmony

And a lonely owl hoots in the darkness

Faded into the city landscape background

These beautiful nature sounds constricted in the park

Scream out to New York “be quiet!

For these two lovers in Central Park”

But inevitable it is when a pub is nearby

And the beer truck roars along to the ally close by

A dog steps out into the car light

And the lovers’ paradise moment is lost

for the dog starts barking as the truck backs up

and the noise slowly elevates

when the three-legged dog chases the beer truck out of town.


...Liz Licea



For centuries lovers have looked to the stars

to learn how to love, care, act, think, and

process all that they had been blessed to

experience while lying in the comfort of

each other’s souls. The silence was

captivating, with so much to teach each

other about what life would unfold for them

in later years. Ah, to be young and in love;

to still yearn to be blindly carried away by

Prince Charming and his gallant steed to a

world you never fathomed could exist when

raised in this complacent society of ours.

To want to settle down in a long forgotten Eden

and befriend fantastical creatures in

hidden passageways where Latin and Algonquin

are the only acceptable languages to be spoken

in everyday conversation. To want to

save Humpty Dumpty six times a day

from his ever so eminent fall, to forget the concept

of self completely in a labyrinth of fantasies

where salamanders serenade Adolf Hitler

every morning to quiet his sociopathic,

Anti-Semitic yearnings for the downfall of mankind

And three legged dogs chase beer trucks out of town.


...Alyssa Capili



For centuries lovers have looked to the stars.

Peering through the long planetary distance

To find that binary pair that hold their names

Or discover a solitary light already at wits end

And put that flamboyant shooting star out of its misery.

For decades the unrequited have looked to the skies.

Admiring the potential reflected in the high clouds,

Searching for comical forms that tease the mind

To play along in the garden of one’s storm

And hide the impending clear weather forecast.

For years the hypnotized have looked to the seas.

Amazed by advancing waves crashing ashore

As the surfs and tides undulates tediously close

Catching only the mist afloat in a suspension

And watch it gravitate away to the lucky moon.

For hours heartbroken I looked to the curb.

Past the empty glass bottom is my home tonight but

Gripping my last mug that has been long out of refills

I beg for charity in the form of an extension to my tab

And the three-legged dog chased the beer truck out of town.



...Jason Tse



For centuries lovers have looked to the stars

Anticipating shooting stars, cuddled in each others arms

Connecting the endless specks. Trying to form pictures of

Cows, birds, whales, the dipper, an ice cream cone.

Not realizing that while they’re looking at the unknowing

The well-known is all around them living a life of its own.

At a distance a cat was running from a three-legged stray dog

A truck driver abruptly presses on the brakes because he didn’t see the red light

For he was trying to finish a half eaten burger from Ahn’s Burgers.

The girl had forgotten to turn off the stove at home,

Her mother came home witnessing the house almost burnt to the ground

She’s furiously calling the innocent adolescence,

But as we suspected, she had turned off her phone.

She’s gonna hear it when she gets home.

The boy’s father is waiting at home to tell him that his mother

Is in the hospital, anticipating death at any moment.

The driver finished his burger at the light even after it turned green,

The cat escaped through the fence,

And the three-legged dog chased the beer truck out of town.


...Julia Le



For centuries lovers have looked to the stars.

Looking for inspiration? More so comfort.

Wide- eyed, Innocent, Naive, Hopeful, Cliche

Alert, young, wild, and potential gazes

Eyes serving as peepholes, peeking into the heart shaped box.

An empty box filled with images of hopes, dreams

Spontaneous plans and reckless forms of security

of what will come, what could be, what should

Yet, the time has passed and could be hasn’t

The aspirations end in weak and futile attempts

The stars that once held such magic

have proven themselves what they are

an array of large irreversible clumps of plasma

floating aimlessly, luminously, manipulatively

Young lovers that once were now stare

Looking for comfort? More so inspiration.

calm, experienced, secure, and above all, appreciative.

Inevitable reality sinks. Eyes now look at what is real

Reality that is eye-level, attainable

And the three-legged dog chased the beer truck out of town


...Gabrielle Arroyo


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