Friday, October 15, 2010

Third exercise-The Rondeau



This exercise was based on the Rondeau form. We're using formal forms for awhile just for the discipline. Upcoming are a couple of sonnets and an exercise developed by Sacramento poet Patrick Grizzell. Here are the Rondeaus. Some slip out of form.

On the Comfy Couch

On the comfy couch sat the golden cat,

If looking for him, the couch would be where he was at,

The cat would never move, afraid his spot would be taken by the deceiving dog,

He wouldn’t mind sharing, but he was to wise to not know the dog was such a hog,

So day after day, that is where he sat.

Their owner would come now and then to move him with a pat,

But the cat would rather be beaten by a bat,

The dog’s eyes were yearning to be glued with a cog,

On the comfy couch.

But the cat thought “he has a mat!”

“Then why does he look at me like a hungry rat!?”

But that single spot had caused such a fog,

Between the animals, someone could have written a blog,

But never did the cat move, instead would lay flat,

On the comfy couch.


By: Naila Khan



Words

I live my life in written word

As well as it spoken or heard

But no one would even believe

Nor hope, dream, ponder, or conceive

That they fly from me like a bird,

So quick and rarely discovered.

These fright less beings have earned

The right to know that just as Eve,

I live my life.

Her life and mine have mirrored

One another, our lust answered

By the tree. No longer naïve,

I sing and write words in a weave.

I live my life.

...Laura O’Hagan


Draped in velvet with a lace trim

In a shop once so bright, now dim,

A marionette, strings in tow

Yearns for a place in the window,

In the spotlight, pretty and prim.

Not one crack, nor a missing limb.

Just a soul waiting for a hymn

With cheeks painted a rosy glow

Draped in velvet.

In a store once teaming, now grim,

Window shoppers pass on a whim,

Seeking a laugh, seeking a show.

Peeking through a clouded shadow

To that no longer at the brim.

Draped in velvet.


...Jason Tse



The ant went marching up the hill,

He finds himself by Jack and Jill.

It puzzled him why they were there

confused themselves, they sat and stared,

at their silver bucket unfilled.

When the girl saw the ant “Kill kill!”

was all she yelled, the ant stood still.

“Calm down, the neighbors you will scare”

The ant just grinned.

With his foot mid-air, the boy yield.

“Silly kids go back to the fields,

for water flows down,” He snared.

An argument, they did not dare

they rushed, and tripped, and down they fell

The ant just grinned.

...Julia Le


I cry for them in Taiji, Japan

Where dolphin's blood feeds the fisherman

Spears piercing flesh, blood draining out

Filling all consumer heads with doubt

Twenty-three thousand dead again


It’s senseless, really, why they can

Keep murdering without a ban.

Not born with voice boxes to shout,

I cry for them.


Why, through no action, do we fan

This disgusting, flawed, and cruel plan

To harm and continue to flout

All they damage and still without

A single law being broken

I cry for them.


...Alyssa Capilli


Sitting alone now beside you

Your heart is gone, it’s split in two

You love someone else, admit it

You feel it in your stomach’s pit.

Denying it won’t help, it’s true.

Every day you go to the zoo

And you sit there thinking it through

The hurt in your heart won’t remit

You don’t love me.

I look into your eyes, so blue,

Your quiet gaze, I get the clue

You want to leave and you admit

That I for you am so unfit

And someone else has changed your view

You don’t love me


...Liz Licea



Our Secret Spot, love has been born

A place we have laughed, we have mourned

Daily, nightly, the time there flies

Unaware of the change in skies

A ripe love that was at first, torn

By a previous love, now scorned

Have we moved on? The past forlorn?

A love founded on that of lies

Our Secret Spot.

Despite all, you make me reborn

With you, I’d try what hasn’t been worn

So unlike myself, one that tries

To form love founded on loose ties

Love stronger through all than unborn

Our Secret Spot.

...Gabrielle Arroyo


His life clung on to the seconds

His short four years of life ended

On the corner laid a mother

His tiny body she smothered

How did he fall under the wheel?

The car moved slow yet no one squealed

The only thing left was a tear

No matter if you live or die

Death follows you

He slowly moved his tiny arm

His body was freed from the dark

Painful smiles ran across his face

He defied the clutches of fate

Although the black coffin is far

Death follows you


...Christina Zuniga



Observing the world around me

Deciding who I want to be

People have already chosen

To be filled with love or poison

But who should I decide to be

Am I happy do I envy?

Or should I stay a mystery

The world a blur an explosion

Who can I be?

A dreamer? lover? Anything!

a human being full of greed?

Of everything I have chosen

My body full of emotion

I have decided to be me

Who can I be


...Angelica Flores











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